mmm...it is very good...nice words r used...but i didn't liked this thing that the poem is just made, there r no feelings for it,if it had ur feelings in it,it wud be much better...n without ur feelings in it the poem is not a poem it is just like only words it has no meaning...n dear i didn't understood these two lines
you read the answer
your eyes glowed m not getting them
i dun think it makes senses...u can try n polish it ...
by the way the topic is good it is nicely written.