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Old 06-05-2006, 01:26 PM
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2 Poems!

Is it really love?
or is it just a passing feeling
am I not convinced?
a bit uncertain of the feeling

Is it the way you make me feel?
so warm with joy and laughter
or could it be the happiness
from moments spent together

The lasting bliss, the kiss I miss,
The sweetest thoughts without a touch
The heart that hurts and bears a scar
thinking how far away you are

You’re on my mind most of the day
And at night I go to bed and pray
An angel soft and gentle as you
Would make my sweetest dreams come true

Thinking about you alone or in class
Writing your name on my bathroom window glass
Wishing you were here
To love hold and care
Wishing I had you with me
To cherish and to stare

Into your soft and beautiful eyes
As we both travel to the skies
And mingle with the stars above
But is it really love?

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I miss you
I miss you terribly this day of love,

Miss you with a wound that stabs and aches.
I see the love around me, and it takes
So much strength simply just to move.
Soon, soon, my love, this waiting will be done.

You and I will have what we desire.
On days like this we'll sit beside the fire,
Undoing all the pain of days long gone.

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Old 06-06-2006, 01:37 PM
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Yet again..

U seem to get a wind ogf my taste ..

"A" yet again ..
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Old 06-06-2006, 02:15 PM
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nice poems. 2nd wali to bahut achi hai.

Thanks 4 sharing
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Old 06-10-2006, 09:29 AM
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Re: 2 Poems!

hmm v sweet

thx for sharing
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Old 06-11-2006, 01:55 AM
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Very nice
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Old 06-11-2006, 01:14 PM
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nice
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Old 06-19-2006, 01:29 PM
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