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Old 01-05-2008, 11:48 AM
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sorry... im jus really bad with titles...in this case i dont even have one...
um...plz read n' if u hav time reply n' tell me if its any good...
*crosses her fingers*


Just now, whatever that love was left for you
It’s gone, its completely gone.
my eyes didn’t even shed a tear
Know why? cause you are not worth it
I don’t think anyone is, cause the one you care about,
you don’t make them cry, you don’t cause them pain
I will wait for that special someone
And he will take your place, little by little
He will bring back the smile, and it wont be fake
He will be the one I trust, cause he wont lie
He will love me so much
That I will forget that you ever existed
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Old 01-06-2008, 02:57 AM
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Old 01-06-2008, 01:03 PM
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Tumhari ye piyari c poem perh ker apni aik poem tumko dedicate kar raha hoon hope u'd like that...

I had closed the door upon my heart
And wouldn't let anyone in,
I had trusted and loved only to be hurt
But, that would never happen again.

I had locked the door and tossed the key
As hard, and as far as I could,
Love would never enter there again,
My heart was closed for good.

Then you came into my life
And made me change my mind,
Just when I thought that tiny key
Was impossible to find.

That's when you held out your hand
And proved to me I was wrong,
Inside your palm was the key to my heart...
You had it all along.
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Tumhari ye piyari c poem perh ker apni aik poem tumko dedicate kar raha hoon hope u'd like that...

I had closed the door upon my heart
And wouldn't let anyone in,
I had trusted and loved only to be hurt
But, that would never happen again.

I had locked the door and tossed the key
As hard, and as far as I could,
Love would never enter there again,
My heart was closed for good.

Then you came into my life
And made me change my mind,
Just when I thought that tiny key
Was impossible to find.

That's when you held out your hand
And proved to me I was wrong,
Inside your palm was the key to my heart...
You had it all along.

OMG!!! I luv it...
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