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Old 02-14-2005, 07:03 AM
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My Immortal

I'm so tired of being here
Suppressed by all my childish fears
And if you have to leave
I wish that you would just leave
'Cause your presence still lingers here
And it won't leave me alone

These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There's just too much that time cannot erase

When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fears
And I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have
All of me

You used to captivate me
By your resonating life
Now I'm bound by the life you've left behind
Your face it haunts
My once pleasant dreams
Your voice it chased away
All the sanity in me

I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone
But though you're still with me
I've been alone all along
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Old 02-15-2005, 01:13 AM
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great choice , thanks for sharing
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Old 02-15-2005, 01:37 AM
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Old 02-15-2005, 05:15 AM
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one of my favorite songs by evanescence, thanks for sharing endurer
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Old 02-17-2005, 06:31 AM
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good.. & thanks payal.. yeap my fav too
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