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Old 03-07-2007, 08:49 PM
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State of Mind . . .

State of Mind . . .

My mind is in a confused state,
Nothing much happened of late.
Neither a moment of sheer happiness,
nor something like sobbing sadness.


Tried to put this question to myself,
failed to get answers off the shelf.
Why does everything seem to go wrong,
but i am doing best to keep it strong.


Groping in the day as well as night,
But unable to find answers in sight.
Can anyone give me a ray of hope,
patting me and telling me to cope.


With that i may get enough courage,
put a step ahead to break that cage.
Release the mind to the open world,
and lets wait till it is unfurled.


It will experience all odds of life,
soft as cotton, some sharp as knife.
Few give pleasure, some give a lesson,
Obstacles increase, easy paths lessen.


There will be all kind of happenings,
beautiful morning, awesome evenings.
But keep your mind in steady state,
if needed, you should have a debate.


Keeping mind cool always helps you,
especially if you dont have any clue.
And when your heartbeat count is more,
you can rely on it, thats for sure.


this is what i had learn from past,
Many more to come, this isn't last.
Every such phase, makes you strong,
help to live better, and live long.


Controlling the mind is the key here,
Keep it open, all will be very clear.
Taking decisions would be easy always,
You would be back to your happy days . . .
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Old 03-10-2007, 01:46 PM
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Controlling the mind is the key here,
Keep it open, all will be very clear.
Taking decisions would be easy always,
You would be back to your happy days . . .


so nice!
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Very nice poem Waffa..about reality, keep sharing
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Old 03-11-2007, 08:23 PM
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simply superb...
life will again teach a lesson
tear us apart and then mend us
like a shallow fear and fire
will rip us apart sadden

wonderful work....simply superb poem...keep it up waffa...loved it ..Thanks 4 sharing...
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Old 03-12-2007, 12:55 PM
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so kooool sharing waffa ... You look like poet
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