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Old 10-02-2006, 04:03 AM
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Smile ایک نظر شام کے بعد

تو نے دیکھا ھے کبھی ایک نظر شام کے بعد

کتنے چپ چاپ سے لگتے ھیں شجر شام کے بعد


اتنے چپ چاپ کہ رستے بھی رہیں گے لا علم


چھوڑ جائیں گے کسی روذ نگر شام کے بعد


شام سے پہلے تھا وہ مست اپنی اڑانوں میں


جس کے ہاتھوں میں تھے ٹوٹے ہوئے پر شام کے بعد


رات بیتی تو گنے آبلے اور سوچا ھم نے


کون تھا باعث آغاز سفر شام کے بعد


میں نے ایسے ہی گناہ تیری جدائی میں کئے


جیسے طوفاں میں کوئی چھوڑے شہر شام کے بعد


تو تو سورج ھے، تجھے معلوم کہاں رات کا دکہ


تو کسی روذ میرے گھر میں اتر شام کے بعد


لوٹ آئےنہ کسی روز وہ آوارہ مزاج


کھول رکھتے ھیں اسی آس پہ در شام کے بعد

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Old 10-02-2006, 08:23 AM
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cant understand ... but its from endurer then it mite b good...
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i will be able to read inshaAllah after this poem is edited again
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تو تو سورج ھے، تجھے معلوم کہاں رات کا دکہ
تو کسی روذ میرے گھر میں اتر شام کے بعد
لوٹ آئےنہ کسی روز وہ آوارہ مزاج
کھول رکھتے ھیں اسی آس پہ در شام کے بعد

Very nice endurer.. I like it so much.. thanx 4 sharing
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Buhat khoob.
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Very Nice Endurer Brother
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hmm
i will be able to read inshaAllah after this poem is edited again
Edited for?
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"میں نے ایسے ہی گناہ تیری جدائی میں کئے
جیسے طوفاں میں کوئی چھوڑے شہر شام کے بعد"

شکریہ پوسٹ کرنے کا
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Rahen sis yahan per to theek hai. App explorer konsa use ker rahe hien?

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