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Old 04-15-2006, 07:15 PM
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This is my own CREATION, have a look

Apne Ghar mian Rung O Boo ki mehfilain saja raha hoon
Main khud apne hi marne ka jashan mana raha hoon

Zameer ka aaj maine apne soda kiya hai
Main is tijarat ki aaj khushiyan mana raha hoon

Apni hi nazron main, main khud hi gir gaya hoon
Tabdili-e-mansab per main nachta ja raha hoon

Aziz, yaar mere sub rooth chuke
Naye dost bana ne per mian jhoomta ja raha hoon
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lekin the 2nd one is just superb
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Old 04-22-2006, 05:32 PM
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