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Old 02-09-2008, 11:36 AM
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Bohat udaas hun men.
Mere qareeb to aao bohat udaas hun men.
Bus aaj toot ke chaho bohat udaas hun men.

Kisi bhi jhootey dilasey se dil ko behlaao..
Koi kahani sunaao bohat udaas hun men.

Andhery raat hai kuch bhi nazar nahi aata
Sitarey torr ke laao bohat udaas hun men.
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Old 02-09-2008, 11:07 PM
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hmmmm... a nice sad one...
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thanks you...4 shearing...
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nice ...one
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wt the hell
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i don't get it
i mean dis poem sucks
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i mean its incomplete
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Old 02-23-2008, 11:42 AM
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i mean its incomplete
than u should complete that ...
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Old 02-29-2008, 05:19 AM
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um i am sorry i um really wasn't trying to be rude, just giving suggestions dear
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Old 03-09-2008, 10:39 AM
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The ghazal is actually incomplete .. here is the full version:

Mujhe Galay Se Laga Lo Bohat Udass Hoon Main
Gham-e-Jahan Se Choralo Bohat Udass Hoon Mian
Ye Intizar Ka Dukh Ab saha Nahin Jata
Tarap Rahi Hai Mohbbat Raha Nahin Jata
Tum Apnay Pass Bula Lo Bohat Hudass Hoon

Har Aik saans Main Milnay Ki Piyas Palti Hai
Sulag Raha Hai Badan Aur Rooh Jalti Hai
Bacha sakoo To Bacha Loo Bohat Udass Hun Main
Bhatak Chuka Hoon Bohat Zindagi Ki Rahon Main
Mujhe Ab Aa Kay Chupalo Tum Apni Bahoon Main
Mera Sawal Na Taalo Bohat Udass Hoon Main
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nice one thanx for sharing
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