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HuM Na SaMjHaY...TeRi NaZrOn...Discuss HuM Na SaMjHaY...TeRi NaZrOn... at the Mehfil; Hum na samjhay teri nazron ka takazaa kiya hai... Kabhi jalwa kabhi parda ye tamashaa ... |
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07-31-2008, 12:36 PM
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HuM Na SaMjHaY...TeRi NaZrOn...
Hum na samjhay teri nazron ka takazaa kiya hai...
Kabhi jalwa kabhi parda ye tamashaa kiya hai... Mujh ko madhosh sa kar rakha hai teri ankhon nain... Warna ay saaki tere mekhanay main rakha kiya hai... Ye suraj sa badan le k meray samnay na aya karo... Main sharabi hoon sharaabi ka bharosa kiya hai... Apnay hontoon ko meray hontoon se chhone to do... Ek do ghoont se botal ka bigartaa kiya hai... Hum na samjhay teri nazron ka takazaa kiya hai... Kabhi jalwa kabhi parda ye tamashaa kiya hai... Last edited by sorryok; 07-31-2008 at 12:39 PM. Reason: to small the text 
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zabardast .. simply outstanding and brilliant .. i would highly recommend that you write more .. herani es baat ki hai kisi ne reply nahi kya .. but i'll say it out aloud .. GREAT JOB!!! would love to see more from you ..
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08-12-2008, 04:43 PM
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Thats not original poetry, please only post your OWN work in Original Poetry Section.
PS: Aadi jee, kabhi nusrat ki tumhien dillagi bhool jane pare gi nahi suni?
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08-13-2008, 01:37 AM
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nice
 understood half and the other half is a question 
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