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terii Khushbuu kaa pataa karatii hai ...(by parveen shakir)

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Old 05-19-2007, 12:04 PM
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terii Khushbuu kaa pataa karatii hai
mujh pe ehsan havaa karatii hai
shab kii tanha'eei meiN ab to aksaR
guftaguu tujh se rahaa karatii hai

dil ko us raah pe chalnaa hi nahiN
jo mujhe tujh se judaa kaRti hai

zindagi merii thi lekiN ab to
tere kahne meiN rahaa karti hai

us ne dekha hi nahiN varnaa ye aaNkh
dil kaa ehavaal kahaa karatii hai

beniyaaz-e-kaaf-e-dariyaa angusht
reit paR naam likhaa karatii hai

shaam paRte hi kisi shaKhs ki yaad
kuuchaa-e-jaa'N meiN sada karti hai

mujh se bhi us ka hai vaisaa hi suluuk
haal jo teraa ana??? karatii hai

dukh huaa kartaa hai kuchh auR bayaa'N
baat kuchh auR huaa kaRtii hai

abr -barsey to inaayat us kii
shaaKh to siRf duaa kartii hai

maslaa jab bhi uThaa chiraGoN kaa
faisalaa siRf havaa kartii hai
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Old 05-19-2007, 12:15 PM
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maslaa jab bhi uThaa chiraGoN kaa
faisalaa siRf havaa kartii hai

bilkul sahi likha hai...this one is also v.nice...loved this shair...thanks 4 sharing...
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Old 05-22-2007, 10:40 AM
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abr -barsey to inaayat us kii
shaaKh to siRf duaa kartii hai

very well said here...parveeen shakir ki har nazam har ghazal apni missaal app hai ...her poetry is awesome

thank u for sharing candle sis
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Old 05-23-2007, 02:10 PM
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yeah welcome sis!


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