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Can u hear ?Discuss Can u hear ? at the Original English Poetry; Can u hear me calling at you? Can u hear my heart beating for you? ... |
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12-28-2006, 07:25 AM
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Can u hear ?
Can u hear me calling at you? Can u hear my heart beating for you? Please listen to my voice.... Please listen to my heartbeat.. You'll hear the love.. Can u hear me crying for you? You'll see the pain... Can u hear me calling at you? Can u hear my heart beating for you? You'll hear it stop beating when u just leave...  Written by - Me.. Last edited by Miss_Sweet; 12-28-2006 at 08:50 PM. 
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12-28-2006, 07:35 PM
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Can u hear me crying for you?
You'll see the pain... superb sweety weldone  keep postin
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12-28-2006, 08:50 PM
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u really liked it???
i have wrote it  ...its not dat gud.. but i have tried 
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12-28-2006, 08:53 PM
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yes dear i realy liked it...
you have wrote very well yar... always try to write more gud poems...
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12-28-2006, 08:54 PM
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thanks
 and sure i will try 
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12-28-2006, 09:41 PM
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u welcum dear
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01-04-2007, 02:35 AM
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no one else liked it i think:S
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01-06-2007, 10:19 PM
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oh common it was wonderfull
just chill dear
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01-24-2007, 03:35 AM
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Thaaaaaaankuu
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01-24-2007, 08:57 AM
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ding dong..may i comein...?
aane se tere aai bahar jane se uske jaye bahar...kaisa matwala hai..meri mehbooba...the song something goes like this..ur poem reminded me of that song...the theme is v.nice..i liked first and last stanza....keep writing poems... 
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01-24-2007, 05:12 PM
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sweet sharing sweety dede........... 
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01-24-2007, 06:35 PM
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thankuu aapi and usma boy
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01-24-2007, 07:19 PM
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u r most welcome sweeto ma sis...
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01-25-2007, 05:13 PM
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WOW !it's awesome sweeto
!!Can u hear me crying for you? You'll see the pain... beautiful keep sharing wid us !
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01-25-2007, 07:02 PM
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Thank uuuu fizoo
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