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Old 08-29-2007, 03:44 AM
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hi rahen;
thanks for appreciating what i write here,and i want my poem to be inserted in a red heart colour giantsize for my wife
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Old 08-29-2007, 11:58 AM
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hello...
hmm..got that...photoshop would be the right software for that...u will hve to search the image...and then add ur poem to that...with some beautifying brushes...

if u want i can make for u...infact we all can...and then u can choose among them.
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Old 08-30-2007, 05:39 AM
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it would be of great help if you can help me out with it.thanks rahen
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Old 08-30-2007, 02:29 PM
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syeda...if u want to do...then go ahead with it...

heman...give me the poem...i will design for u...or we can paste here...so that everyone can design it for u.
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Old 08-31-2007, 03:32 AM
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ok rahen you can paste a couple sitting on the moon too here with my poem below
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Old 08-31-2007, 03:36 AM
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syeda...if u want to do...then go ahead with it...

heman...give me the poem...i will design for u...or we can paste here...so that everyone can design it for u.
see rahen it would be of great help if you can help me out with this poem of mine:-
I love you so deeply,
I love you so much,
I love the sound of your voice
And the way that we touch.
I love your warm smile
And your kind, thoughtful way,
The joy that you bring
To my life every day.
I love you today
As I have from the start,
And I'll love you forever
With all of my heart.

And remember at the top you should write My darling wife Alpa; and below the poem -from your loving hubby Heman
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see rahen it would be of great help if you can help me out with this poem of mine:-
I love you so deeply,
I love you so much,
I love the sound of your voice
And the way that we touch.
I love your warm smile
And your kind, thoughtful way,
The joy that you bring
To my life every day.
I love you today
As I have from the start,
And I'll love you forever
With all of my heart.

And remember at the top you should write My darling wife Alpa; and below the poem -from your loving hubby Heman
another poem i want is:-
When I came to you
I had nothing.
Then you offered
me your heart
and I had everything.
I could feel your soul
within mine.
My life had meaning.

You became my reason
for being.
You were my dawn in
the morning.
You were my single star
on a clear night.
You were the scent
of roses in the garden.
You made my life
as fresh as the air after
a spring rain.
You made me alive.

Without you I feel empty.
My morning is without
its dawn.
My night without
its star.
My soul has no
companion without
your love.

Together we are
everything.
Apart we are nothing.
Together we have meaning.
Together we are one.
and remember the to lines as well as the lines below the poem of mine should be the same as i have requested in my first poem to you which is My Darling wife Alpa and below Yours loving Hubby-Heman
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Old 08-31-2007, 09:03 AM
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ok...give me some days...i will make it...
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ok...give me some days...i will make it...
thanks a lot rahen for your help
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Have completed one of ur poem...and will start making the second one..waiting for ur view.

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Old 09-06-2007, 03:23 AM
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Have completed one of ur poem...and will start making the second one..waiting for ur view.
that is really good rahen thanks a lot for helping me out .Have a nice day

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Old 09-06-2007, 04:20 AM
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that is really good rahen thanks a lot for helping me out .Have a nice day
this poem you can help me out with a young couple sitting on a sunset evening at a seashore on the rocks but the title heading should be in my wifes name as well as my name below
Your Beautiful love...
If i were granted a special request from the stars above,and i could wish for anything,I would ask for your love.
If high hope and heart alone,could make sweet dreams come true.
I would live in a perfect world.where i am loved by you.
If my greatest heart's desire could be carried in on the tide,
I would meet you at the shore,and walk ever by your side.
If i could buy anything,my heart eve dreamed of,I would forgo the material things,and stock up on your love.
If i could soar to heaven wrapped in wings of bliss,your arms world be around me,I would welcome every kiss.
If i could dream of anything,I would dream only of your touch,and hold you close to me each night the way i yearn to so much.
If i could own paradise where everything's divine,then my world exist in the place where you are mine.
If prayers could bring anything.
I would ask directly from the heart,for a promise of tomorrow when we are never more apart.For there's one thing in life that i look forword to and that's the days ahead i will spend with you.And out of all the thing that i could hope for or ever dream of nothing compares to you and your beautiful love.
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Old 09-07-2007, 04:18 AM
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can you design this poem for me with a couple sitting on the parapet near a seashore in evening and the waves rumbling below.the top part should be addressed as Darling Alpa and below the poem of mine it should be written Ever Yours-heman
I could keep on dreaming my whole life
If it meant that i could stay next to you
Never wake up, keep my eyes closed
If it meant that i could always be near you.

I could keep on crying my whole life
If it bought you just a moment of your smile
Never try to stop, cry till the tears go dry
If it brought you happiness, even just a while

I could keep on talking my whole life
If my words could soothe your screaming fears
Hold you close and keep you comforted
smile whilst I drown in your tears.

I could keep on smiling my whole life
If my smile was what made your day
However painful the trails of this woeful life
I would hide the pain, keep smiling each day

I could keep on loving my whole life
If the one who held me was you
Be lost never to be found again
in a secret place that u only knew

But I can never tell you the way i feel
and the reality couldnt be much more true
the only way i'll ever be near you
is when i dream about u...
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Old 09-07-2007, 09:13 AM
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wat is a parapet...
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Old 09-08-2007, 03:32 AM
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a parapet is a wall near a seashore where people can sit and watch the waves of the sea below.Like Marine Drive sea of Mumbai India
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