A Good Poem I wrote.. I want u to see if they are good..Plea

rahulbaba · #1 (**permalink**) 08-23-2007, 08:11 PM

Hi Guys

I wrote a poem for my girl friend

let me know if u like it

Quote:

The Dreams which You have To Desire
Are all those for which I aspire
The Pettels of the Rose
Just tell me You are the house of love
A Love which Undying Defines me
It completes me It Reminds me
It makes me realise what I am
Its a feeling I have never felt
And It Makes my heart melt
The Way in which You smile
You are the one who will walk a mile
With me together We will Conquer!
For Us Awaits a Journey to be Started
A Journey Which Will Define the Ethics
Ethics of Pure Love Carved in Ivory
Which Even the Gods Will crave for!
For You are... The one whome I love
And whome this heart feels as One
You are the one who makes me leap into the sky
in hopes to fly Even I fail I do Leap Its because of you
Because you are the dream A Dream Unconquered
You are immortal Not a Human being Your soul is
A Beauty in itself Its Not Mixed with Lust,Hatred Pride
its Blended in Gold And Heavenly Jewels!
They Find themselves Honoured to be crafted on thy crown
For thee are Life In a human form!
A Miracle Waiting to be unleashed A Miracle which may sense
as a Normal Thing for the outside world but for this Cold Hearted
Human Being You are God, You are Life
For thee is whome I live for For whome I will die
For thee is whome I would Love all my life!

Quote:

LOve they say is Very might and vast
They say it cant be equalled
Love is the connection of souls
Well I say it gives your heart holes
Love they say is a matter of pride
I say Hey mac step aside let me go by
Love is victories of victories
Love they say cant be defeated
Love they say is Holy and pious
I say Oh My god...Why are these couples so suspicious?
They say Love is not lust
I say Yes true thats what both of them ask first
They say Love is Filled with Flowers and fruits
I say Love is a mischief which should be cut from the roots
They say Love is like the rain.. Clear and Magnificient
I say Love is a Khichadi Which is made very efficient
They Say when you love you are not afraid
I say Yeah baby..Now i know why countless couples Escape
They say People envy Love as they are jealous
I say Wow People You are so genrous

They Say Love Doesent needs looks or riches
I say Hmm if thats the case why do girls shift boy friends every other hour?
They say first love cant be Erased
I say True But why to write such a phrase?
They Say COuntless Immortals have died in love
I say Thank god The population was Balanced becasue of them
They ask me Did you ever Love You hearted cold
I say to them with a tear in my eyes
I was Loved by the clouds But then I loved the rain
I was Loved by the flowers But then i loved the tree
I was Loved by the sunshine But then I loved the moon
I was Loved By You...But then I never Loved anyone else.

Quote:

As you walk on the Virgin Sands of the beach
The Treese give u solacle with their breeze
The sun gives you Shade in its grace
He asks you who art thou the eternal light
You Body is wrapped in the silent silks
You walk on where the honey dew milks
The silent pace in which you trend
makes the coming grasses offend
They wait for your grace upon them
Like the grace of the monsoon for the farmers
You are life in many ways unknown unreasoned
The 16 year old Blossoms in hearts of millions
For some thy art inspiration to work
for some to live,For some to survive
For thy word speaks the untruth of evil
the unkindness of the sin
The Silent pace at which you steal away
No wealth can bribe No prayers persuade to stay

Saying thanks wont hurt

Miss_Sweet · #2 (**permalink**) 08-23-2007, 09:17 PM

wow...they r awesome!

*Fatima* · #3 (**permalink**) 08-24-2007, 02:28 AM

WOOOOOOOOOW she is very lucky

Shikari · #4 (**permalink**) 08-24-2007, 03:20 AM

nice poem ..u wrote it..really..its fantastic

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Glamorous-Ladee · #5 (**permalink**) 08-24-2007, 04:25 AM

really nice!

rahulbaba · #6 (**permalink**) 08-24-2007, 08:15 AM

Quote:

Big and tall was the mountain before me,
Rising from the depths of the blue sea,
Overhanging above the wide, wide earth,
Teetering about its own huge girth.
How I longed to reach its peak and
Eye the world and all its land,
Rivers and valleys, the hill and the plain,
Downs of Australia,plateaux of Spain,
Everything that stretches across the shore
And goes on for miles and miles and more.
Rolling blue oceans with their waves so high;
Yearned I to view what lay far and nigh.
Oh so high and higher I would go,
Up above where the fleecy clouds flow.
All of a sudden crashed over me a
Realization that was so very bitter:
Early in my youth, when I was full of life,
When I knew no worry, no struggle nor strife,
One accident had I, forget it I shall never;
Now it has left me maimed and crippled for ever.
Down poured my tears without hindrance,
Even as I saw someone looming in the distance.
Right up to me came he, holding out his hand,
Flashing a smile at me, he helped me up and
Up the majestic mountain he led me. A
Light of hope was he; I call him Brother.

This was written by sister for me!

rahulbaba · #7 (**permalink**) 08-24-2007, 08:16 AM

Quote:

The serene night with u comes to an end
with my death the sunlight rose upward to ammend
every past every moment recoiled in this stone heart
broke up like the vessels of a Indian clay mart
i lay by your arms,awaiting death a poor mans joke
my mind takes me to the time immortal
where i was once a free man with no story to tell,
u made this life a heaven from my past hell,
thou gave me nothing, nor did i give u anything,
love for once i despised as cowardice,
i played my life as it were pieces of dice
awaiting my death in ur arms for no reason why,
a life without u is like a imprisoned bird waiting to die
we ran together for 7 years, years of hope,
years of freedom,years of love and joy,
then suddenly u said i was a dumb boy,
love turned into deceit, Candies into hard hitting words
flowers turned into urns,dreams turned into dust,
Why .. is the question. i ask as my last wish,
you could not see me in my eye,
your body was filled with sin,bloody sin,
that thousand perfumes of rome wouldnt wipe out,
I faced death twice once by the hands of the almighty,
other from thy hands filled with contempt.
on the way , Satan asks me you fool why did u go to her?
I stood speechless thinking u were a heaven in my hell.
let those who love ye be reminded, A man who loves faces death twice
Once at the hands of his enemies, once from his own hands

This is the next one.. I hope u like it!

RAHEN · #8 (**permalink**) 08-24-2007, 11:53 AM

its like...heart is written on the paper...but seems like u r more than that for them...really lovely...

...i m moving this thread to original poetry section where all self written poems are cherished.

friendlygal786 · #9 (**permalink**) 08-25-2007, 04:18 AM

you write very good...great work!

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