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Old 02-22-2007, 09:50 PM
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I was that girl.
I was that girl
who gave good advice
and helped you along
when you suffered in life

I was that girl
that smiled everyday
when things seemed impossible
she'd show you the way

I was that girl
a friend to you all
who never betrayed
and gave you a hand when you'd fall

I was that girl
who picked everyone up
and made each one of you laugh
as life dealt bad luck

I was that girl
that had no reason to cry
never once felt pain
or wanted to die

I was that girl
a mystery in truth
like a god sent angel
who stood beside you

I was that girl
who hid all her pain
and kept on smiling
as she went insane

I was that girl
that never shed a tear
though she was ignored
through out all her years

I was that girl
a lost soul without hope
to help you along
when she couldn't cope

I was that girl
who you thought you all knew
until the pain was to much
and the facade was through

I was that girl
that life pushed around
and held you all up
as she hit the ground

I was that girl
a hollow life, empty shell
leading you to paradise
as she was beaten in hell.
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Old 02-22-2007, 10:27 PM
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Wow...very deep poem. Nice sharing
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Old 02-23-2007, 01:20 AM
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its koooool
keep posting your beautifull poems
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i was that boy
who knows writin poem is not playin with toy
so he knew the joy
and praised ur poem sayin ohh boy.......great work *S*
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Old 03-08-2007, 07:56 PM
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i waz that girl who appreciated u when u were not coming here...keep coming..lovely poem....hope that everything gets better in ur life...keep writing poems u hve that talent....
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wow that was beautiful and sad all at the same time. great work.
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