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Old 01-07-2007, 07:09 AM
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A Love Lost

Here I am again, no longer can I pretend
that I don't see you and him.
Here, alone I stand with the caress of an empty hand.
Tears are in my eyes, this you can't deny,
the emotions that pass us by when I think of you and I.
This is a tale of another love lost, the tale of two fates that crossed;
this is the tale of two souls who weren't meant to be.
While two souls connected, the other was set free.
That soul moved forward, that soul did bleed,
that soul was broken, and that soul was me.
I watched them from afar as they created a relationship,
and turned away and left forever once I saw them kiss.
I loved her then, I still love her now,
what good is love without the eternal vow?
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Old 01-07-2007, 07:27 AM
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wah wah..zabardast....
I loved her then, I still love her now,
what good is love without the eternal vow?

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Old 01-07-2007, 08:43 AM
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