Miss you

Miss you (A poem by me, well I think its a poem)

You know I got it all,
But really I need a wife at home cuz,
Most of these girls confusing me,
I dont know if they like me or using me,
Tiffany and Nancy dont fulfill my fantasy,
I dont ever wanna spend the night alone,
Thats why I need a girl that I'll be true to me,
And dont play no games with me!

I met a lot of women in my lifetime,
But not a lot of women got the right mind,
I need somebody I can hold tight,
And who makes me feel so good inside,
I need somebody I can built with,
Thats why I need you back in my life, (Tazi)
And dont play no games with me!

Damn baby I wish you were here,
I loved the way I used to kiss your wet lips,
You used to be all mine
I just wanted you to know that I didnt wanna let you go!!

nice one...thanks 4 sharing...

You know, I used to listen to a lot of rap, hip hop, and R&B when I was in high school. I believe you have "used" some lyrics from the song, "I need A Girl" by P. Diddy and Usher. Isn't that called plagiarism?

very nice muzi...bari achi likhi hai...

umm and imma agree with hina...

Even if copied It's very good, I don't think he'd do that, actually there is a thing known in poetry to be mafoom, (an urdu term, don't know much about english poetry!) mafhoom means the overall thought and its quite natural that many at times mafhooms match but the wording is some what always different, I mean even I once accedetialy did that, it matched the wording of an old song of the old devdas...