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Old 03-15-2007, 03:26 PM
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Cool Mother...

The one who bears the sweetest name

and adds lustry to the same

Who shares my joys n cheers when sad

The greatest friend I ever had

Long life for her, for there's no other

Who can take place of my dear mother
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Old 03-15-2007, 04:02 PM
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none ...no one at all...isse thora poem k tareeqe se likhne ki koshish karo...aap ka theme waqayi mein bahut acha hai..aur likh bhi sakti ho achi...keep sharing..welldone candle jaan..
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Old 03-15-2007, 05:00 PM
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Poem suna rahi hi yan story.......per word kafi ache hein...
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Old 03-19-2007, 08:33 PM
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Old 03-19-2007, 11:30 PM
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Very nice and sweet poem candle, keep writing
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nis 1 candle....really missin this place....everyones goin so cool....but i cant do nethin...keep up candle....
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Nice try, GC, though I do think it could be more polished. ^^
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Nice on GC..
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