My poems

Just some poems I wrote....

This is is called Family

'family' what does it mean?
Is it sticking together and trusting each other
Or is it slagging your loved ones?
I'm still tryin to figure it out........
The word 'family' used to mean something to me!!
It is something that's there but I can't have it
I guess I'm the unfortunate one's
All I hear is screams 24/7 in my ears
Sometimes they fall on deaf ears but sometimes they hurt bad on the inside and outside
A lot of people say crazy things when they are angry
But, this has been going on for too long
I just can't put up with the fight anymore
I feel like I'm locked down in a closet
I know none of this going to change
But what can I do I hate that person!!!
I wish I was up with the stars peace and quiet
Betrayal can be seen everywhere even within your loved one's
You may not understand what all of this is going on
But sometimes keeping things to myself can help
Lets see how does tomorrow turn out to be
I just wish it will be better than this or same
But not worse than this or ill do something....
It won't be within my limits but who knows


This one is called Betrayal

Why is it tht some1 u trust so much breks ur heart?
some1 u consider as a bro is nutin but a sell out
som1 u run to wen u hve problems kills u inside
Y does he be a playa nd nt understand ur feelings
Y cnt he give me an explanation fo wa he did
Was he jealous I don't know
I cld b lik him nd tell al his frnds bout him but I didn't
I guess I cnt stoop down to da sme level
Thts wa happens wen u trust a "rich frnd"
He tinks he's sooo fly but he aint nutin but a rat to me
Da ting he done affects our frndship of 2yrs
Now I gota watch my bac 24/7
I didn't evn tel nutin to his sis
But I rely need to kno y did he do dis to me
Answer me u coward why???????
I h8 u fo wat u done
I can neva forgive u so get lost
But if u eva face me nd try to b frnds
I bet my own life ill jus hit u nd nt feel sorry
Mayb its tym u shd grow up nd act ur age
U immature *******!!!
U cn fool da world but nt me neva
Jus don't eva face me!!!


This one is called Some people

Some people just don't understand me completely
Some people worry about me too much!!!
I apreciate their concern but sometimes....
Sometimes I feel like I can touch the sky
Every morning when I wakeup I can feel the sun
Some people say I'm very mature and smart
Some people hate me because I'm seperated
I feel like a falling star which is detached
Expressing feelings isn't hard it is what you express
Sometimes people just don't get you at all!!
Some people act shady all the time
Some people have changed from bad to good
My own blooded people mock me too much!
But I have stopped caring from now on
Because I'm living my life the way I want to
For all the good I have done just thank me
For all the bad I have done just forgive me please.

ooooo yea thx m8

family is staying together through thick and thin...no matter of location.....aur agar koi wafa na kar sake then give them time by talking to them in a good manner...kyunki blood relation kabhi chore nahi jate...balke bahut carefully manage kiye jate hain...dard aur pyar isse se hai...

nice poem..salute to u..reps for u..muzi ..no doubt u r sensible and helpful....keep posting..welldone...

arite cool thx alot nd ill tak ur advice

ah glad u liked em ye i jus gota write more nd ill post em up den

ummm.....nice

thx der buddy.

OMG! Did someone say Poems?

What is Poetry? A short piece of imaginative writing, of a personal nature and laid out in lines is the usual answer. Will that do? *scratching head vigorously*.

Where is literary techniques such as 'Meter', 'Metaphor', and 'Rhyme'?

Is breaking/arranging 'anything' into lines enough to call it a Poem? Is this what you call Poetry?

Muzi all you did is to break/arrange thoughts into lines. Aww Muzi you killed the spirit of Poetry

oh ok man im sorry ill rememba tht da nxt tym im writin out ma feelings....nd to tink if ne1 evn cares bout dem?

Hey Muzi! Don't try to get me wrong. I think, I very lovingly tried to make you understand (somewhat) what poetry is all about. I liked reading your thoughts and feelings, but there's a great great difference between prose and poetry. What you wrote has characteristic of prose than of poetry.

Anything written in ordinary form of written or spoken english, without meter and metaphor and rhythm is Prose. And Poetry is a composition written in metrical feet forming rhythmical lines. That's all I wanted you to understand.

Hope this 'll help you understand it better.

Peace! God Bless!!

Very nice Muzi my friend
U write nicely...I think if u write about ur own experiences it always comes out better...keep it up and keep sharing with us

ye thx der friendly gal