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Old 03-24-2007, 09:31 PM
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Flower The rain


It is a poetry written by me when the rain was going.


THE RAIN

Lovely is the rain going
Beautiful are the trees,plants and flowers looking
In this amazing time everyone wants to enjoy.


And what lovely now the rain has stopped and sun is there
And what a luck i could not see the rainbow.

I hope the person reading it will like it. ...
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Old 03-24-2007, 10:21 PM
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yeah i liked the theme and a good start...try to write more on this...Thanks 4 sharing...and yeah...welcome to Desitwist....
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nis one....i liked it.....keep up....
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hey wait 4 me....also i liked it....nice rain....bohut achi likih hai...nice sharing....keep it up...
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Its nicely written
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