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Old 10-24-2006, 11:04 PM
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Hello.
Can you see me?
I am the tears in your eyes, the hurt that shows to all when you weep.
I am your mind, which aids your eyes to help you see.
Can you see me?
I feel myself running down the curves of your cheek.
I've been running a lot lately, and you are getting weak.
Can you see me?
I am the salted fluid your eyes use to stay moist, please save me.
Do you feel me run down your cheek?
Can you see me?
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Old 10-26-2006, 11:58 AM
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tears can say wat words can't - nice one


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Hello.
Can you see me?
I am the tears in your eyes, the hurt that shows to all when you weep.
I am your mind, which aids your eyes to help you see.
Can you see me?
I feel myself running down the curves of your cheek.
I've been running a lot lately, and you are getting weak.
Can you see me?
I am the salted fluid your eyes use to stay moist, please save me.
Do you feel me run down your cheek?
Can you see me?













wow
very nice sis
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