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Old 07-09-2007, 05:27 AM
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Heart You Are...

I am no poet, but I needed a way to let out my feelings. It's very simple and straightforward.



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Old 07-09-2007, 09:50 AM
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Its a great poem sis..so beautiful and so lovely
Its not simple and straightforward, its a very good job by u...
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Old 07-09-2007, 12:14 PM
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Lovely one Hina. Thought may be simple, affectionate and passionate. But penning it down in such a beautiful manner is neither simple nor straightforward.
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Old 07-10-2007, 05:22 AM
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waooo...image and poem...dono mein khoob acha kaam kia hai...poem is nice...but seems like u hve more to say...but words are few...bravo hina...keep it up...
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Old 07-11-2007, 10:09 AM
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You're always welcome Bhayya.

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Old 07-12-2007, 05:20 AM
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Masha-Allah. Beautifully expressed Hina

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very nice hina...
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wow .. awesome read .. you should write more ..
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Thank you Volvo.

Aww. Thank you Aadi.
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very Very nice hina...
Beautifully written, very touching
Nice work
Keep on writin!
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