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AANGAN KE MERE NEEM DHOOP JALA RAHI HAE MUJE
KISI KI GARAM BAHOON KI YAAD DILA RAHI HAE MUJE

GIR RAHI HAE DAR SE NIKAL KAR MUJH PAR YEH DHOOP AISE
JAISE KOI CHAIN KI NEEND WOH SULA RAHI HAE MUJHE

KAHIN DOOR SE WOH LAI HAE EK MAE AJAB SI
JO NAZAROON SE MERI WOH PILA RAHI HAE MUJHE

DIN DHAL GAYA HAI WO JA RAHI HAI CHOR KAR MUJHE
MAGAR YOON JATE JATE KHOON KI ANSOO RULA RAHI HAI MUJHE

CHALO AB TO SHAAM HO GAYI HAI SHAHZAIB
LAGATA HAE KEH DAYAN-E-TANHAI PHIR BULA RAHI HAE MUJHE

(SHAHZAIB KHAN)

mene yeh ghazl apne astaan ke aangan par dhoop girte dekhte likha, waqt asr or maghrib ke beech ka tha... aap soch sakte hain kin jazbaat mein aa kar meine is ko lokha ho ga.............
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