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  1. 09-08-2006 06:55 PM #1
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    My Own Shayri (Dil Ka Dard)

    Dil Ka Dard Tu Samajhti Nahin..
    Khuun Ke Ansuu Rota Hai Yeh Dil,
    Tu Jaanti Nahin...

    Kabhi To Mere Dil Ka Haal Jaan...
    Kya Hain Is Dil Ke Armaan..
    Kabhi To Meri Muhabbat Ko Pehchaan...

    Par afsoos...

    Dil Ka Dard Tu Samajhti Nahin...

    Raat Din Teri Yaad Mein Rota Hai Dil
    Tujhe Paane Ki Aas Mein Tarapta Hai Dil...
    Tujhe Dekhne Ko Yun Machalta Hai Yeh Dil...

    Par Afsoos...

    Dil Ka Dard Tu Samajhti Nahin...
    Khuun Ke Ansuu Rota Hai Yeh Dil...Tu Jaanti Nahin...





    Hope You Liked It
    This Was My Own First Poetry

    Wrote it Two Months Ago..So I Thaught Why Not Share It Here



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  2. 09-08-2006 06:58 PM #2
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    Well Done...simply well expressed!
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    Re: My Own Shayri (Dil Ka Dard)

    Thanks alot Atlantic
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    niCe bro
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    nicely expressed - yup i liked it.
    keep going in writing poetries


    Thanks 4 sharing
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    Re: My Own Shayri (Dil Ka Dard)

    Thanks waffa and Rahen
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    Re: My Own Shayri (Dil Ka Dard)

    woww bohat achi likhi hai
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    Re: My Own Shayri (Dil Ka Dard)

    wah Awesome

    Keep them coming ab to "Unhon" ne bhi daad de di hai ab ki baar happy shairy karna
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