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  Discuss Tanhaiyaan at the Original Urdu Poetry; Tanhaiyaan Meri Ghurbat Ki Kahaniyan, Meri Ulfat Ki Dastanen Aur Koi Na Jane, Bas Yeh ...

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Old 03-31-2007, 03:53 PM
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Meri Ghurbat Ki Kahaniyan, Meri Ulfat Ki Dastanen
Aur Koi Na Jane, Bas Yeh Dewaren Janen

Is Kamre Ki Chaar Dewaroon Mein Laga Hai Ek Dar
Yehan Na Aaen Ge Dil Nahsin Log Yeh Likha Hai Darwaze Par

Na Aye Roshni Mere In Roshan Danoon Se
Aae Bhi To Lage Jese Qfs Ki Salakhoon Se

Mat Poch Kiya Haal Hai In Ulfat Ke Maaroon Ka
Tikana Nahin Hota Gardesh Ke Sitaroon Ka

Us Ko Dehk Kar Bhi Lagta Hai Ji Bhara Nahin
Khuab Tha Woh, Toot Kar Bikhar Gaya Kahin

(shahzaib Khan)
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simply awesome...bahut achi likhi hai aapne....welldone..
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Zabardast hai bhai, waise age aap ki 14 to nahin hogi ???
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Zabardast hai bhai, waise age aap ki 14 to nahin hogi ???
AADAAB! MUKHE ELM HAE KEH AKSAR MERI KAHI BAAT MERI UMR SE MUKHTALIF LAGTI HAE MGR MERA YAQEEN MANITE MEIN 14 BARS KA HI HOON. WAISE SHAN ROZ SEH DT SE GUZR HONA KUCH KAM RAHA HAE... ASL MEIN YEH MENE FEB 07 MEIN LIKHI THI JAB MEIN ITNA PAKKA SHAEIR NAHIN THA... AB REKHTA SE MUTALIQ KUCH KAR HOTA HEA, YEH AAP SE PEHLI MULAQAAT ACH LAGI, UMEED HAE KEH AAP KO MERI QADEEM REKHTA PASAND AYE GI...
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nice poem
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Aadaab! Tasleem!
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tasleem, aadaab!
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sooperb one.. buhat achi likhi hey .. keep writing
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very nice..

achi hai bohat..thanks
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