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Old 04-16-2007, 12:26 AM
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GHAZAL

YEH WASL HJR KA KYOON
YEH GUNAH AJR KA KYOON

NA UMEED O YAAS E INTIHA, MGR
HAE MNTZR US KHBR KA KYOON

HAE DIL EK SANG MERA, PAR
GMAAN US NZR KA KYOON

AE ESHQ E BE NIAZ O BE QARAR
MARA HAE TU SBR KA KYOON

SHAHZAIB E BE QRAR AAZ BHI
MAJBOOR HAE FKR KA KYOON

(Shahzaib Khan)
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Very good, but please try to write complete words
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Very good, but please try to write complete words
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Thank for the comment and for the words, well, if I write the complete words, the BEHER will look like a long ghazl, and that would lead to misunderstanding of some special expressions but nxet time I shall try noy to shorten too many words...
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