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10-19-2007, 06:47 PM
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Zakhm E Dil
Tu jab katra ke paas se gujar jaega
waqt ka pahea wahein ther jaega teri chashme qatil ka teer kab raegan gea yeh nah samjhna keh zakham dil ka mere bhar jaega maar dale gi hamein apni hi kam maegi aur ilzam iska tere sar jaega itni khamshi hey keh darta hoon mein uthe ga toofaan tu kiss ke ghar jaega. jaane wale kab kissi ke roke ruke hein zafar har ik ne jaana hey jab waqt e muqararr aega 
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10-20-2007, 10:30 AM
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jimmi...nicely written poem..but me poem sahi se samajh nahi pa rahi as there are some mistakes of words..plz correct them...
Tu jab katra ke paas se gujar jaega waqt ka pahea wahein ther jaega teri chashme qatil ka teer kab raegan gea yeh nah samjhna keh zakham dil ka mere bhar jaega maar dale gi hamein apni hi kam maegi aur ilzam iska tere sar jaega itni khamshi hey keh darta hoon mein uthe ga toofaan tu kiss ke ghar jaega. jaane wale kab kissi ke roke ruke hein zafar har ik ne jaana hey jab waqt e muqararr aega overall the poem is nice...keep it up..i liked the last two shair. 
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10-21-2007, 03:03 PM
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