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Thread: Unsolved Dream

  1. #1
    It's been awhile since I've posted a poem or even in general. I recently wrote a new poem and wanted to share with you all. It's a sad poem...

    Just hasn't been the same for the past few days.
    All I can remember is seeing your face.
    I miss your smile, your fervor, and grace.
    Your kisses were passionate, full of warm embrace.
    I could take you in my arms as my heart ran a race;
    a pitter-patter of beats reverberating into space.
    I see you in my mind but I feel misplaced.
    I had so much time, but it's all gone to waste.
    If I could stop crying then your lips I could taste.
    I could close my eyes and we'd stand face-to-face.
    But it was all a dream and a sweet escape.
    All I can remember is seeing your face.
    It just hasn't been the same for the past few days...

    Let me know what you think. Thanks in advance.

  2. #2
    sad indeed, but skillfully written.

    keep sharing Bhayya
    Get off my back

  3. #3
    very good...u write very nice, great wording thanx 4 sharing:-)
    ~Ye Dard Ka Tufaan Guzra kyu nahi..Dil Toot Gayaa Hai To Bikhra kyu nahi..Ek Hi Shakhs Ko Chahta Hai kyu Itna..Koi Dusra Is Dil Me Utarta kyu nahi~

  4. #4
    zabardast...bahut achi hai...and a sweet dream for someone in love...keep coming and posting...:up;


    Thanks 4 sharing...



  5. #5
    nice one! .

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