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    Just some poems I wrote....

    This is is called Family

    'family' what does it mean?
    Is it sticking together and trusting each other
    Or is it slagging your loved ones?
    I'm still tryin to figure it out........
    The word 'family' used to mean something to me!!
    It is something that's there but I can't have it
    I guess I'm the unfortunate one's
    All I hear is screams 24/7 in my ears
    Sometimes they fall on deaf ears but sometimes they hurt bad on the inside and outside
    A lot of people say crazy things when they are angry
    But, this has been going on for too long
    I just can't put up with the fight anymore
    I feel like I'm locked down in a closet
    I know none of this going to change
    But what can I do I hate that person!!!
    I wish I was up with the stars peace and quiet
    Betrayal can be seen everywhere even within your loved one's
    You may not understand what all of this is going on
    But sometimes keeping things to myself can help
    Lets see how does tomorrow turn out to be
    I just wish it will be better than this or same
    But not worse than this or ill do something....
    It won't be within my limits but who knows


    This one is called Betrayal

    Why is it tht some1 u trust so much breks ur heart?
    some1 u consider as a bro is nutin but a sell out
    som1 u run to wen u hve problems kills u inside
    Y does he be a playa nd nt understand ur feelings
    Y cnt he give me an explanation fo wa he did
    Was he jealous I don't know
    I cld b lik him nd tell al his frnds bout him but I didn't
    I guess I cnt stoop down to da sme level
    Thts wa happens wen u trust a "rich frnd"
    He tinks he's sooo fly but he aint nutin but a rat to me
    Da ting he done affects our frndship of 2yrs
    Now I gota watch my bac 24/7
    I didn't evn tel nutin to his sis
    But I rely need to kno y did he do dis to me
    Answer me u coward why???????
    I h8 u fo wat u done
    I can neva forgive u so get lost
    But if u eva face me nd try to b frnds
    I bet my own life ill jus hit u nd nt feel sorry
    Mayb its tym u shd grow up nd act ur age
    U immature *******!!!
    U cn fool da world but nt me neva
    Jus don't eva face me!!!


    This one is called Some people

    Some people just don't understand me completely
    Some people worry about me too much!!!
    I apreciate their concern but sometimes....
    Sometimes I feel like I can touch the sky
    Every morning when I wakeup I can feel the sun
    Some people say I'm very mature and smart
    Some people hate me because I'm seperated
    I feel like a falling star which is detached
    Expressing feelings isn't hard it is what you express
    Sometimes people just don't get you at all!!
    Some people act shady all the time
    Some people have changed from bad to good
    My own blooded people mock me too much!
    But I have stopped caring from now on
    Because I'm living my life the way I want to
    For all the good I have done just thank me
    For all the bad I have done just forgive me please.

  2. #2
    great one...
    U r really good writer...hope to see more..

    Reps added

    Hats off to u
    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]

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    family is staying together through thick and thin...no matter of location.....aur agar koi wafa na kar sake then give them time by talking to them in a good manner...kyunki blood relation kabhi chore nahi jate...balke bahut carefully manage kiye jate hain...dard aur pyar isse se hai...

    nice poem..salute to u..reps for u..muzi ..no doubt u r sensible and helpful....keep posting..welldone...:up;



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    oh wow...they r sooo nice!

    u r really very gud writer.... keep sharing

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    ah glad u liked em ye i jus gota write more nd ill post em up den

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    thx der buddy.

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