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Thread: Jaana Hai Humne...

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    Tumse Mil kar, jaana hai humne
    pyar hota hai kya...

    teri deed kar ke, jaana hai humne
    deedar hota hai kya..

    tumse mil kar, jaana hai humne..
    ehsaas hota hai kya...

    tujhe kareeb paa kar jaana hai humne
    yeh manzil hoti hai kya..

    tera haath thaam kar, jaana hai humne
    yeh saharaa hota hai kya...

    magar tujhe kho kar, jaana hai humne
    yeh dard hota hai kya...


    This poem is written by ME - Naila
    I hope u ppl liked it :$

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    bohut achi hai Naila
    Its very nicely written...aur lafz ache use kiye hai
    good job:thumbs:
    ~Ye Dard Ka Tufaan Guzra kyu nahi..Dil Toot Gayaa Hai To Bikhra kyu nahi..Ek Hi Shakhs Ko Chahta Hai kyu Itna..Koi Dusra Is Dil Me Utarta kyu nahi~

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    yea its nicley expressed
    ur welcome and keep writing
    ~Ye Dard Ka Tufaan Guzra kyu nahi..Dil Toot Gayaa Hai To Bikhra kyu nahi..Ek Hi Shakhs Ko Chahta Hai kyu Itna..Koi Dusra Is Dil Me Utarta kyu nahi~

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    tum se milker jana hey hum ne
    hey Naila kia bat hey yar grat
    pehle kabhi bataya nahi tum itni achi poet ho

    buhat buhat buhat acha likha hye
    Superb One :thumbs:

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    Thankuuuuu

    batati kya...bas kabhi share nahi ki :$

    leiken likhi to bohat hain

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