bohut achi hai Naila
Its very nicely written...aur lafz ache use kiye hai
good job:thumbs:
Tumse Mil kar, jaana hai humne
pyar hota hai kya...
teri deed kar ke, jaana hai humne
deedar hota hai kya..
tumse mil kar, jaana hai humne..
ehsaas hota hai kya...
tujhe kareeb paa kar jaana hai humne
yeh manzil hoti hai kya..
tera haath thaam kar, jaana hai humne
yeh saharaa hota hai kya...
magar tujhe kho kar, jaana hai humne
yeh dard hota hai kya...
This poem is written by ME - Naila
I hope u ppl liked it :$
bohut achi hai Naila
Its very nicely written...aur lafz ache use kiye hai
good job:thumbs:
~Ye Dard Ka Tufaan Guzra kyu nahi..Dil Toot Gayaa Hai To Bikhra kyu nahi..Ek Hi Shakhs Ko Chahta Hai kyu Itna..Koi Dusra Is Dil Me Utarta kyu nahi~
really liked it? oh thankuuu
yea its nicley expressed
ur welcome and keep writing
~Ye Dard Ka Tufaan Guzra kyu nahi..Dil Toot Gayaa Hai To Bikhra kyu nahi..Ek Hi Shakhs Ko Chahta Hai kyu Itna..Koi Dusra Is Dil Me Utarta kyu nahi~
aww..thanks again :hug;
tum se milker jana hey hum ne
hey Naila kia bat hey yar grat
pehle kabhi bataya nahi tum itni achi poet ho
buhat buhat buhat acha likha hye
Superb One :thumbs:
Thankuuuuu
batati kya...bas kabhi share nahi ki :$
leiken likhi to bohat hain
hey sweetu plz post someother one
jo tum ne khud likhi ho okk
ok i will