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Thread: Can u hear ?

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    Can u hear me calling at you?
    Can u hear my heart beating for you?

    Please listen to my voice....

    Please listen to my heartbeat..
    You'll hear the love..

    Can u hear me crying for you?
    You'll see the pain...

    Can u hear me calling at you?

    Can u hear my heart beating for you?
    You'll hear it stop beating when u just leave...

    :cryss:


    Written by - Me..

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    Can u hear me crying for you?
    You'll see the pain...


    superb sweety
    weldone :thumbs:
    keep postin

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    u really liked it???

    i have wrote it :$...its not dat gud.. but i have tried

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    yes dear i realy liked it...
    you have wrote very well yar...

    always try to write more gud poems...

    :thumbs:

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    no one else liked it i think:S

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    ding dong..may i comein...?

    aane se tere aai bahar jane se uske jaye bahar...kaisa matwala hai..meri mehbooba...the song something goes like this..ur poem reminded me of that song...the theme is v.nice..i liked first and last stanza....keep writing poems...:up;



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