Can u hear me crying for you?
You'll see the pain...
superb sweety
weldone :thumbs:
keep postin
Can u hear me calling at you?
Can u hear my heart beating for you?
Please listen to my voice....
Please listen to my heartbeat..
You'll hear the love..
Can u hear me crying for you?
You'll see the pain...
Can u hear me calling at you?
Can u hear my heart beating for you?
You'll hear it stop beating when u just leave...
:cryss:
Written by - Me..
Can u hear me crying for you?
You'll see the pain...
superb sweety
weldone :thumbs:
keep postin
u really liked it???
i have wrote it :$...its not dat gud.. but i have tried
yes dear i realy liked it...
you have wrote very well yar...
always try to write more gud poems...
:thumbs:
thanks
and sure i will try
u welcum dear
no one else liked it i think:S
oh common it was wonderfull
just chill dear
Thaaaaaaankuu
ding dong..may i comein...?
aane se tere aai bahar jane se uske jaye bahar...kaisa matwala hai..meri mehbooba...the song something goes like this..ur poem reminded me of that song...the theme is v.nice..i liked first and last stanza....keep writing poems...:up;