aww....niceee!
The True You
You and I walking in the rain
Beside that beautiful sea which has nothing to gain
Your hand is in my hand
Making path through the sand
The whole nature seems wet
But this moment is still bright
You may find my love only through my body
But my inner me has no love for any
Just for friendly relation the water is with the sand
But when you have someone else there is no one for me to stand.
"I'm a friend for a friend who really wants to be a goood friend of mine"
aww....niceee!
you call it nis....but it is sad at the last line...
"I'm a friend for a friend who really wants to be a goood friend of mine"
yeah i knw it is sad but its a NICE poem!
thx coz atleast u liked it...and ur the onle one who read it....
"I'm a friend for a friend who really wants to be a goood friend of mine"
when u have someone..there is no one for me to stand....its simply superb...its important to let go...keep sharing...:up;
Yeah very nice..
Keep writing bro
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thank you....atleast i may believe tht there are some friends who will read my poems..
"I'm a friend for a friend who really wants to be a goood friend of mine"
Abhi hi parha maine...its very nicely written Luitsean, keep writing beautiful poems
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