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    The True You


    You and I walking in the rain
    Beside that beautiful sea which has nothing to gain
    Your hand is in my hand
    Making path through the sand
    The whole nature seems wet
    But this moment is still bright
    You may find my love only through my body
    But my inner me has no love for any
    Just for friendly relation the water is with the sand
    But when you have someone else there is no one for me to stand.
    "I'm a friend for a friend who really wants to be a goood friend of mine"

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    you call it nis....but it is sad at the last line...
    "I'm a friend for a friend who really wants to be a goood friend of mine"

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    yeah i knw it is sad but its a NICE poem!

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    thx coz atleast u liked it...and ur the onle one who read it....
    "I'm a friend for a friend who really wants to be a goood friend of mine"

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    when u have someone..there is no one for me to stand....its simply superb...its important to let go...keep sharing...:up;



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    Yeah very nice..

    Keep writing bro

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    thank you....atleast i may believe tht there are some friends who will read my poems..
    "I'm a friend for a friend who really wants to be a goood friend of mine"

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    Abhi hi parha maine...its very nicely written Luitsean, keep writing beautiful poems
    ~Ye Dard Ka Tufaan Guzra kyu nahi..Dil Toot Gayaa Hai To Bikhra kyu nahi..Ek Hi Shakhs Ko Chahta Hai kyu Itna..Koi Dusra Is Dil Me Utarta kyu nahi~

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