why to get defeated with just one step...when u hve succeeded 6-7 step possibly...keep on going ..poem is v.sorrowful....and yes keep sharing ur expressive poems....:up;...
I'm sick and tired of being admired.
Wired to this brain with every word that is fired,
I can't explain what I want or desire.
I am the distained in this funeral pyre.
I can feel through my veins the blood that maintains
harmony in my heart and throughout my brain.
Too much pain I have gained and I wish to be freed.
The game of life has put me to shame at its inhuman speed.
I am the last left of my creed, and for that reason I shall forever bleed.
Insanity will falter in my minds disease as I fall prey down on my knees.
why to get defeated with just one step...when u hve succeeded 6-7 step possibly...keep on going ..poem is v.sorrowful....and yes keep sharing ur expressive poems....:up;...
You see defeat, I see savation. The last line can be interpreted as a double meaning:Originally Posted by RAHEN, post: 226327
I.E. ...as I fall prey down on my knees
OR ...as I fall pray down on my knees
I wrote it that way on purpose. There are two ways of looking at it and it's left up to the reader. Defeat or salvation.
thats great...yeah..sentences have different meaning...and yes it is up to the reader...