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    I'm sick and tired of being admired.
    Wired to this brain with every word that is fired,
    I can't explain what I want or desire.
    I am the distained in this funeral pyre.
    I can feel through my veins the blood that maintains
    harmony in my heart and throughout my brain.
    Too much pain I have gained and I wish to be freed.
    The game of life has put me to shame at its inhuman speed.
    I am the last left of my creed, and for that reason I shall forever bleed.
    Insanity will falter in my minds disease as I fall prey down on my knees.

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    why to get defeated with just one step...when u hve succeeded 6-7 step possibly...keep on going ..poem is v.sorrowful....and yes keep sharing ur expressive poems....:up;...



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    Quote Originally Posted by RAHEN, post: 226327
    why to get defeated with just one step...when u hve succeeded 6-7 step possibly...keep on going ..poem is v.sorrowful....and yes keep sharing ur expressive poems....:up;...
    You see defeat, I see savation. The last line can be interpreted as a double meaning:

    I.E. ...as I fall prey down on my knees
    OR ...as I fall pray down on my knees

    I wrote it that way on purpose. There are two ways of looking at it and it's left up to the reader. Defeat or salvation.

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    thats great...yeah..sentences have different meaning...and yes it is up to the reader...



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