veryyyy nice
Abhi tum yaad na aao,
Abhi kuch zakhm baaqi hain.
Mohabbat ki abhi kuch rasm baaqi hain
Abhi bechain hain hum bhi
Abhi aanson chalakne hain
Abhi dil so gaya hai roote roote
Usse bhi jugna hai
Tumhare ghum mein roona hai, tarapna hai
Abhi ruh ko machalna hai
Labon pe jaan aani hai
Mohabbat ko sisakna hai
Abhi sanson mein garmi hai
Inhe tum sard hone do
Abhi tum yaad na aao
Abhi kuch waqt lagna hai…
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veryyyy nice
Thanks!!!!!!!!!
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great...:up;... for how long have u been writing poems..?
MashAllah
Great Kavish :up:
~*jeenah mera terah Lila too nahi pas to kiya howa_khushboo tere har pal rahai sanshoo meri sada_mai nahi jaata meri manzil kahan Yoon hee chalta rahoon mai agar_yeh hai kasa seher_ junoon ka safar tera aihsaas he too rahai gah amar *~
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~Come with me and sleep forevermore...~
I started writting when I was in my college but I usually write "Aazad Nazam"
............Alfaz aor jazbat kafiya radeef ki bandish ke muhtaj nahi hotey........
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lekin agar aap chahen tau aap kafiye aur radif k sath poems likh sakte hain..kyunki aap ki is poem mein "hain" and "hai" mil rahe hain..