"revelation"

[chocus]

Darkness, deepening in layers,
and restiveness; my eyes,epmty abodes,
devoid of sleep, as they wud be after
a funeral; a silence that signal a fire
somewhere, slowly creeping in2 my soul.
My heart blazed. Like a water sprinkled
in a flaming oven, fueling the fire.
the flames in my hearts flew high.
Lit up the surroundings,water-land,cities,
ruins mourning the past grandeur;
minarets of deserted mosques; wht not
did my eyes bhold; all was lit;
and light bgot light.
I stood in that light,it zeemed
naked from head 2 toe, like the dead,
on doomsday wud arise frm their grave.
naked frm head2toe,like the dead,on doomsday
wud arise frm their grave.
GOD knows
if i were alive or dead, like doomsday,it felt,
and i, alone with GOD.
GOD!Where is ur promised victory;
how further away is it:
And then in a flash I saw
a great army marching through mountains & deserts;
its fierce thumping, reverberating through the earth,
sending tremors 2its core.

[RAHEN]

great imagination...nice one..keep sharing chocus..well done..:up;

[villies]

good one choci

[chocus]

thnx bro villi
thnx Rahen

[Muzna]

great one chocus thanks for sharing