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Thread: I was that girl.

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    I was that girl
    who gave good advice
    and helped you along
    when you suffered in life

    I was that girl
    that smiled everyday
    when things seemed impossible
    she'd show you the way

    I was that girl
    a friend to you all
    who never betrayed
    and gave you a hand when you'd fall

    I was that girl
    who picked everyone up
    and made each one of you laugh
    as life dealt bad luck

    I was that girl
    that had no reason to cry
    never once felt pain
    or wanted to die

    I was that girl
    a mystery in truth
    like a god sent angel
    who stood beside you

    I was that girl
    who hid all her pain
    and kept on smiling
    as she went insane

    I was that girl
    that never shed a tear
    though she was ignored
    through out all her years

    I was that girl
    a lost soul without hope
    to help you along
    when she couldn't cope

    I was that girl
    who you thought you all knew
    until the pain was to much
    and the facade was through

    I was that girl
    that life pushed around
    and held you all up
    as she hit the ground

    I was that girl
    a hollow life, empty shell
    leading you to paradise
    as she was beaten in hell.

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    Wow...very deep poem. Nice sharing :thumbs:
    ~Ye Dard Ka Tufaan Guzra kyu nahi..Dil Toot Gayaa Hai To Bikhra kyu nahi..Ek Hi Shakhs Ko Chahta Hai kyu Itna..Koi Dusra Is Dil Me Utarta kyu nahi~

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    i was that boy
    who knows writin poem is not playin with toy
    so he knew the joy
    and praised ur poem sayin ohh boy.......great work *S*
    "I'm a friend for a friend who really wants to be a goood friend of mine"

  5. #5
    i waz that girl who appreciated u when u were not coming here...keep coming..lovely poem....hope that everything gets better in ur life...keep writing poems u hve that talent....



  6. #6
    wow that was beautiful and sad all at the same time. great work.
    Jaleesa ?'s the Atlanta Braves
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