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    The Odalisque
    by: Hillol Ray

    Tale of falling and failing in love
    May not ring the bell-
    Until or unless we sink or swim in it,
    Or someone likes to tell!
    Episodes get opened and closed,
    Depending on choices we make-
    As we walk on verdant path
    That our life wants to take!
    Cheers and tears over the years
    Dazzle like the crystal ball-
    And paint the calligraphy in our brain
    From Spring to Fall!
    Waves of emotion inundate the notion
    To forge an indelible link-
    Of hate and love, from bottom and above,
    When we begin to think!
    A ring without a string
    Acts like a rolling stone-
    And thrives in desperation
    To chill our skull and bone!
    Fame and fortune play vital role
    With sands of time-
    And navigate the boat of love
    Dwindling in the ocean’s chime!
    Shadowy mind haunts for love,
    Ignoring the spouse’s care-
    And the odalisque dons on horizon
    With a slinky body to bare!
    Love and trust, lust and thirst
    Dissuade the long held ring-
    Off the spouse’s finger
    Before we begin to see the fling!
    Cacophony of life starts to dance
    With horrific marching band-
    While the odalisque takes the helm
    To rule with iron hand!
    Bitter-sweet memories intertwine
    To forbear on hug or kiss-
    And mystify the wedlock in a rush
    With attenuation without a hiss!!
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    On Independence Day Here's wising our dreams of a new tomorrow come true for us NOW AND ALWAYS!

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    saira...wat is the summary of this poem..?..sorry i didnot understand this...



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    mine either Rahen!
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    On Independence Day Here's wising our dreams of a new tomorrow come true for us NOW AND ALWAYS!

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    wowwwwwww
    nice sharin'!
    wOrK SmaRt NoT HaRd......

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