none ...no one at all...isse thora poem k tareeqe se likhne ki koshish karo...aap ka theme waqayi mein bahut acha hai..aur likh bhi sakti ho achi...keep sharing..welldone candle jaan..:up;
The one who bears the sweetest name
and adds lustry to the same
Who shares my joys n cheers when sad
The greatest friend I ever had
Long life for her, for there's no other
Who can take place of my dear mother
wOrK SmaRt NoT HaRd......
none ...no one at all...isse thora poem k tareeqe se likhne ki koshish karo...aap ka theme waqayi mein bahut acha hai..aur likh bhi sakti ho achi...keep sharing..welldone candle jaan..:up;
Poem suna rahi hi yan story.......per word kafi ache hein...
WELLDON
Han Ssiis N Bro
Papers K Baad Try Karooon Gi!
wOrK SmaRt NoT HaRd......
Very nice and sweet poem candle, keep writing :thumbs:
~Ye Dard Ka Tufaan Guzra kyu nahi..Dil Toot Gayaa Hai To Bikhra kyu nahi..Ek Hi Shakhs Ko Chahta Hai kyu Itna..Koi Dusra Is Dil Me Utarta kyu nahi~
nis 1 candle....really missin this place....everyones goin so cool....but i cant do nethin...keep up candle....
"I'm a friend for a friend who really wants to be a goood friend of mine"
Nice try, GC, though I do think it could be more polished. ^^
Nice on GC..
I love mee mommy :$