Reply With Quotemuzi u tried to write a poem....but u end up writing a song....why dont u join eminem...welldone muzi...keep it up...:up;
i m moving it to original poetry...cause its right place is there...
All right this I'm not sure if its a poem, but this seemed like the right section to post this in.
Can someone just explain me the meaning of love?
One girl that can make me feel everything!!!
Says she wants you "out of my system"
And I quietly move back, without asking her for a reason
My emotion filled heart is stabbed to death
And you do nothing to prevent it, but who stabbed it?
Was it me? or her love towards me?
I seriously can't figure it out on my own
She introduces to the better side of life
But when I cry how come she doesn't show emotion?
As I recall it, she said to me first "Muzi, I'm in love with you"
And we stared at each other for 30 minutes
All I asked for you to let me do is hold you
I feel lonely, going to a night club, filled around with girls
I was just trying to make you happy, but if leaving me is you happy...
Why is it like that?
I seriously can't figure it out on my own
I don't want to be stuck up in this cold cold world
She ain't nothing like the girl I used to know
Good with her friends, good with her parents, this is crazy
I open up the door and she shuts me down
I really want us to work out, I'm trying, its no excuse
After 6 months of being together with her
Why can I only come up with so little to write?
Is my love that damn weak?
I seriously can't figure it out on my own!
Vague imaginings and mundane reflections on life will not provide new personal insights or new perspectives. This realisation prompts me to reject this life denying tranquil, uncreative existence and to confront once again the storm of the creative process in which I will remake myself by having your LOVE!
I wrote all this, hope you people liked it.
muzi u tried to write a poem....but u end up writing a song....why dont u join eminem...welldone muzi...keep it up...:up;
i m moving it to original poetry...cause its right place is there...
lol ya Rahen thts wa ma m8s say too hehe
and thank u
Its really expressive Muzi and u wrote nicely, i agree its like a song
its very good, keep writing :thumbs:
~Ye Dard Ka Tufaan Guzra kyu nahi..Dil Toot Gayaa Hai To Bikhra kyu nahi..Ek Hi Shakhs Ko Chahta Hai kyu Itna..Koi Dusra Is Dil Me Utarta kyu nahi~
thank you nd glad ya liked it
ur welcome...
~Ye Dard Ka Tufaan Guzra kyu nahi..Dil Toot Gayaa Hai To Bikhra kyu nahi..Ek Hi Shakhs Ko Chahta Hai kyu Itna..Koi Dusra Is Dil Me Utarta kyu nahi~
too long dude
lol if ya tink thts long den read dis poem:
W.B.Yeats-Easter 1916
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