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Thread: The rain

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    It is a poetry written by me when the rain was going.


    THE RAIN

    Lovely is the rain going
    Beautiful are the trees,plants and flowers looking
    In this amazing time everyone wants to enjoy.


    And what lovely now the rain has stopped and sun is there
    And what a luck i could not see the rainbow.

    I hope the person reading it will like it. ...
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  2. #2
    yeah i liked the theme and a good start...try to write more on this...Thanks 4 sharing...and yeah...welcome to Desitwist....:up;



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    THANKS RAHEN FOR APPRECIATING ME
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    nis one....i liked it.....keep up....
    "I'm a friend for a friend who really wants to be a goood friend of mine"

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    Thanks luitsean
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    hey wait 4 me....also i liked it....nice rain....bohut achi likih hai...nice sharing....keep it up...
    Ramadan Kareem to everyone ...

  7. #7
    Its nicely written
    ~Ye Dard Ka Tufaan Guzra kyu nahi..Dil Toot Gayaa Hai To Bikhra kyu nahi..Ek Hi Shakhs Ko Chahta Hai kyu Itna..Koi Dusra Is Dil Me Utarta kyu nahi~

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    thank you ahssas for giving me the ood commments.
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    hey thanks friendlygal786 app ne jo shayari likhi hai woh bhi bohot achi hai.
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