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Thread: "I Miss You.. Did You Have To Leave?"

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    I saw how you drifted from those you called friends
    I saw how you put up a wall with no end
    You closed up your heart to the ones who still care
    And said to us all in so many words.."enter in if you dare".

    But time has a way of just closing the door
    Because you closed out all your friends from before
    But I being one who could not say "Good bye"...
    Decided to open my heart up and try

    To show you this friendship was falling apart
    I gave you some gifts that spoke right to your heart
    This was just my way of saying "hey friend"
    This thing we call friendship does not have to end

    I also wrote poems as my way to express
    That I was unable to just let things rest
    And for a short time you accepted my gifts
    And realized that you were still loved and still missed

    But something went wrong when I spoke to your heart
    Because shortly after, you broke it apart
    That breakable bond that is deep within a soul
    You tore it to shreds and it left me unwhole

    But try as you may you can stomp on my heart
    And kick me around when I'm falling apart
    But one thing remains you cannot kill my spirit
    I'll always be there at the door...but you must first open it.

    Author: Connie Donnell

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    wonderful poem...nice sharing
    ~Ye Dard Ka Tufaan Guzra kyu nahi..Dil Toot Gayaa Hai To Bikhra kyu nahi..Ek Hi Shakhs Ko Chahta Hai kyu Itna..Koi Dusra Is Dil Me Utarta kyu nahi~

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    Oh, wow! I kind of went through a similar situation.

    Very nicely expressed.
    Get off my back

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    i loved the last one...its simply great one...welldone ma sis..keep it up...:up;



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    simply superb sharing

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    thanks for liking

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