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  1. 04-04-2007, 03:21 AM #1
    Shaeireurdu
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    AE JAAM TUJH MEIN WOH RUNG HAE JO HAEB MERI BZM MEIN
    BESHAK KE MEIN HOON TANHA AUR TU HAR KISI KI NZR MEIN
    (SHAHZAIB KHAN)

    yeh sher novmber ya desembr 2006 mein tanhai ki ghari mein likha tha,
    mein jaanta hoon keh aab yeh mera tariqa nahin, magar kisi zamane mein main yoon shairy karta tha...ab to yeh ghalat lagti hae mgr is sher ke ba'ad mein ne bahut kuch seekha......
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  2. 04-14-2007, 10:15 PM #2
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    acha mujhe yeh galat nahi laga....aap ko is mein kia galat laga...?


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  3. 04-16-2007, 01:09 AM #3
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    Quote Originally Posted by RAHEN, post: 274309
    acha mujhe yeh galat nahi laga....aap ko is mein kia galat laga...?
    Asl mein baat yeh hae keh mujhe apne lambe sher kam ache lagte hain. Meri akser shairy Beher mein hoti hae. Mujhe aap ki baat se ka'fi tasali hui hae...
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