A Ghazal On Aisha Aapi Janee..

[spotlesssoul]

I had composed this ghazal on my aapi about 10 months ago... Just wanted to share with you all


Jisski soorat lagay purnoor ujaloon jaisi,
Aur seeart bhi hay pakeeza khuaboon jaisi.

Narva baat par bhi lab ko muqfil rakhna,
Hairat aankhoon main saja laina savaloon jaisi.

Usskay lehjayt ki phunwaroon ko bhalla kya naam doon,
Phool si naram yaa phir roee kay galoon jaisi.

Usski baatoon ki milavat ko soochoon tau kahoon,
Cheeni misri ki dali burhiya kay baloon jaisi.

Dooriyaan naam hain jismoon ki judae ka magar,
Yaad main baat hi kuch hoti hay wisaloon jaisi.

Bay misaal ussko kahoon k main hira jo,
Zindagi apni guzar rahi hay misaloon jaisi.

[Fairy]

Aww....:hug;

Meiko bhi buhat achii lagti haina doll :giveflower;

[spotlesssoul]

Awee

Such a quick responce :$

[Fairy]

Jee :wink:

Title mein hi Aisha Aapi tha na...tou aik damse dikh gaya

[spotlesssoul]

Ohkiee :$

[RAHEN]

mashaAllah - v.nice gazal :applaud;
hira aap to bilkul shair ho.


Thanks 4 sharing

[Sporadic]

Very nice ghazal
Thanx for sharing

[Fairy]

Jee Rahen sis, ye kaafi acha likhti hein Masha-Allah

[spotlesssoul]

Aww... JazakAllah All

[RAHEN]

JazakAllah alf khair

mashaAllah - hira - never leave dis talent of urs - jab bhi dil chahe likha karo aur kisi din publish bhi karwana. reallly aap acha likhti ho. mashAllah