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Thread: Painful Pain...

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    Painful Pain...
    Words are human, emotions divine!

    So how do I express

    My pain in just a line...

    The strain, the trauma, the stress
    Man-made words just cannot explain
    The depth or intensity of my pain.

    Does pain have any colour?

    Yes, of course it does...

    The blazing colour of fire

    My head shoved into a furnace.

    Does pain have any taste?

    Yes, I've swallowed it...

    The bitter acidic paste

    Burning its way to my stomach pit.

    Does pain have any flavour?

    Yes, it sure does stink...

    A sealed tomb - stale air,

    Suffocating, choking life within.

    Does pain make any sound?

    Yes, I've heard the echoes...

    Ear splitting cacophony, my head resounds

    With silent screams and anguished whispers.

    Does pain have any weight?

    Yes, I've been carrying it around...

    Heavier than an elephant - my freight

    Unbearable burden, being crushed to the ground.

    Does pain have a cost tag?

    Yes, I've paid the price...

    Worse than a washrag

    My warped twisted life.

    Through poetry I try to express

    The pain that's ripping me apart

    But mortal words are inadequate

    To speak the language of the heart.

    Feelings - sad and happy... God's creation

    Divine aid needed to express these emotions.
    I M What i Call i m "i m Loaded hell"
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    hmmm boht achi hai but itni takleef de kyun hai...Is everything fine with u...I m back sorry kafi din sse ghayeb tih the reason is posted on sentiments forum...tc

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    dard e dil ko dawa chahiye..yeh zindagi kaise guzaren...har pal pyar chahiye..



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    Excellent...I love it!
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    IT was very intense, nice sharin
    ~Ye Dard Ka Tufaan Guzra kyu nahi..Dil Toot Gayaa Hai To Bikhra kyu nahi..Ek Hi Shakhs Ko Chahta Hai kyu Itna..Koi Dusra Is Dil Me Utarta kyu nahi~

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    well that was awsumm... i liked the way it waz writn
    wOrK SmaRt NoT HaRd......

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