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When you left me
In silence and grace
My heart weeps
How can I feel your trace
The fleeting memories
Hard to erase
The familiar voice
Renders my heart race
Days go by
Sorrow grows
My tears dry
With a soul hollow
Like a lost child
So hopeless and desperate
My guiding star
Where is your orbit?
Your voice still whispers
I can't feel your presence
Try to hide you in my lines
Words fail me once
My soul was lost
It has gone with thee
Please light a candle for me
Brightening my way to meet thee...
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seems like words joined together...but not from heart...will give this 4/10..
but keep sharing...would wait for more...
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i would give it even less maybe three
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