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  1. 10-29-2005, 11:25 PM #11
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    Quote Originally Posted by Endurer @ Sat Oct 29, 2005 2:21 am
    wo mauj-e-tabasum say uktaa sa geya hai
    ankhon mein uske sailab a sa geya hai
    yun to ab bhi dard hai baaki lekin
    apne aansoun ko wo chupa sa geya hai
    Very nice
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  2. 10-29-2005, 11:25 PM #12
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    Quote Originally Posted by Quiet Whisper @ Sat Oct 29, 2005 11:25 am
    Yeh Dil khoon ke aansoo rota hai kyun?
    Yeh dil gham mein rahne laga hai kyun?
    Mud'at guzar di hum ne, tere intezaar mein,
    abhi tak nahin aaya hai tu, aisa kyun?
    Cool! :applaud;
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  3. 10-30-2005, 04:03 AM #13
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    Kaash tera Pyar bhi saacha hoota....
    Mere Ansoon ki tarah
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  4. 10-30-2005, 04:14 AM #14
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    .... my bad, i didn't read througly... main ne kisi aur poet ka likh dia tha.
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  5. 10-30-2005, 04:15 AM #15
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    i have a question.. aik person aik hi shair likh sakta hai, ya jitnay marzi ?
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  6. 10-30-2005, 04:52 AM #16
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    Hmm....ehm...ya u can write so many u want and...jiske ziada ache honge utne chances hain... jitne ke
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  7. 10-30-2005, 12:34 PM #17
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    aunty,yeh bate ga kon ke sub say ache kis ke the i mean judge kon hoga??
    Aap noooooooo!!!!!
    :P :P
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  8. 10-30-2005, 12:35 PM #18
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    how about vote dia jaye, jis ki poetry ziyda pasand ki jaye wohi winner. per mujhay poetry parhna pasand hai, khud se tu bilkul nahi likh sakti
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  9. 10-30-2005, 05:29 PM #19
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    Dil Kee Baatain hum kissi ko bataya nahin kerte
    Dil kay ansoo hain hum kissi ko dikhaya nahin kerte

    Behta hua tofaan hai iss dil mein
    Issi liye hum kissi ko dil-e-jaan banaya nahin kerte


    can't think of any better ops:
    "The world and all the things in the world are precious but the most precious thing in the world is a Virtuous Woman."
    - Prophet Muhmmad, Sal Allahu 'Alayhi wa Sallam
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  10. 10-31-2005, 12:55 AM #20
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    Quote Originally Posted by manni9 @ Sun Oct 30, 2005 5:34 am
    aunty,yeh bate ga kon ke sub say ache kis ke the i mean judge kon hoga??
    Aap noooooooo!!!!!
    :P :P
    Yes iam the judge :mrgreen:
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