brilliant poem, every single word is leaving an impact on my mind, thanks bunches for sharing this shabi
and welcome here
In my world of imagination, u exist in flames
Which burn me every sec, my soul they claim
Tried avoiding them, kept myself from going insane
But their sight always caught me...
To their mercy I came..!
All the doors closed...all roads seemed blocked
And I questioned your intentions...
Asked … how I can be the one who gets your quests unlocked???
Inquisitive of the answers I stood in time
N so my wait ended as your voice echoed in ma mind
"Only u I desire, for u this wait is mine...
For u I burn as flames, "is this not enough a sign"?
My eyes were blinded...once u opened the door
Shadows seemed painted ... from the roof 2 the floor
Between the silences that held us together...I felt allured
To explore more of this distance
To inquire if your acts were pure..!
Don’t know y...but I asked u 2 depart..."leave me mate"
You’re nothing but a shining star, not knowing its fate
U cant make things change...You'd only love to hate
So let me be...Cuz’ you’re nothing but a vision blinded with faith
Hearing these words...the flames vanished with no clue
N relieved should I have felt...but myself I had made a fool
N now loneliness shadowed...sealing my lips...making them mute
Realization dawned upon me..."whatever u said...was all true"
It was your hunt for my love...I was among the lucky few
Could’ve been blessed with true love...
Helpless I stood, as always never knew what to do..!
I fell on ma knees, tears rolled down my face
In agony I cursed myself...I screamed in pain
Cuz’ I always pushed u away...every time u came
I feared relationships, thought of it as hells’ game(s)
N now I miss u...whenever I go down the memory lane
....but the time has come for me to take this blame
Though no matter what I do...can't ever wash these stains...
I cry muttering these words...drenched in rain
“I love u”...n wonder, can things ever be the same again..!
brilliant poem, every single word is leaving an impact on my mind, thanks bunches for sharing this shabi
and welcome here
thnx a lot .
right...its excellent,,,
LiFe'S pReCiOuS mOmEnTs DoN't HaVe VaLuE uNlEsS, tHeY aRe ShaReD........
very very nice shabi
Great work
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hey [username:48beee4c6e], i know whats on your mind
Nice poem :1cool; :up;
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