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    In my world of imagination, u exist in flames
    Which burn me every sec, my soul they claim
    Tried avoiding them, kept myself from going insane
    But their sight always caught me...
    To their mercy I came..!

    All the doors closed...all roads seemed blocked
    And I questioned your intentions...
    Asked … how I can be the one who gets your quests unlocked???
    Inquisitive of the answers I stood in time
    N so my wait ended as your voice echoed in ma mind
    "Only u I desire, for u this wait is mine...
    For u I burn as flames, "is this not enough a sign"?

    My eyes were blinded...once u opened the door
    Shadows seemed painted ... from the roof 2 the floor
    Between the silences that held us together...I felt allured
    To explore more of this distance
    To inquire if your acts were pure..!

    Don’t know y...but I asked u 2 depart..."leave me mate"
    You’re nothing but a shining star, not knowing its fate
    U cant make things change...You'd only love to hate
    So let me be...Cuz’ you’re nothing but a vision blinded with faith

    Hearing these words...the flames vanished with no clue
    N relieved should I have felt...but myself I had made a fool
    N now loneliness shadowed...sealing my lips...making them mute
    Realization dawned upon me..."whatever u said...was all true"
    It was your hunt for my love...I was among the lucky few
    Could’ve been blessed with true love...
    Helpless I stood, as always never knew what to do..!


    I fell on ma knees, tears rolled down my face
    In agony I cursed myself...I screamed in pain
    Cuz’ I always pushed u away...every time u came
    I feared relationships, thought of it as hells’ game(s)
    N now I miss u...whenever I go down the memory lane
    ....but the time has come for me to take this blame
    Though no matter what I do...can't ever wash these stains...
    I cry muttering these words...drenched in rain
    “I love u”...n wonder, can things ever be the same again..!

  2. #2
    brilliant poem, every single word is leaving an impact on my mind, thanks bunches for sharing this shabi

    and welcome here

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    right...its excellent,,,
    LiFe'S pReCiOuS mOmEnTs DoN't HaVe VaLuE uNlEsS, tHeY aRe ShaReD........

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    very very nice shabi

    Great work

    BTW Welcome to desitwist,

    please introduce yourself in "welcome and introduction" forum, so that other member's also know about you
    hey [username:48beee4c6e], i know whats on your mind

  6. #6
    Nice poem :1cool; :up;
    A Minute They say it takes a minute to find a special person, an hour to appreciate them, a day to love them, but then an entire life to forget them.

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