imaginative- nice theme- more expression in this could lead it to best one.
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Sitting alone on the bench in the park,
staring at the opulence of the dark,
a mysterious stranger strides by.
She stops, glancing into my eyes.
Her long, straight hair wafted in the soft breeze.
A shy smile came over me.
I could vaguely make out a smile upon her lips,
she came towards me strutting her hips.
Left, right, left right,
I was entranced by this strangers gentle stride.
I recall this moment so perfect and clear,
I leaned in towards her but then she disappeared.
imaginative- nice theme- more expression in this could lead it to best one.
thanks 4 sharing
Indeed a great one
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